Hi Maha! Trapped (in a good way) in a three-hour Reading/Writing Retreat with only only one (rhizome-themed) article to dissect I first produced non-linear notes in an attempt to shake it up a bit. No – not hacked enough! The words still looked dull and boring. They did not lure me in. Next step – produce a cartoon strip/comic book page from the ideas that had been essentialised in the short notes. That was it!
I’d try that if I were you.
And if the comic book strip itself does not work – perhaps ask some younger students to produce their alternative versions of your comic book?
Good luck. Sandra 🙂