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you

This part is making me emotional and I love how you told it. The sense of a person wanting to support you that way, yet your doubts from the minority who doubted you and reminded you of the critiques of the panel. Does it make a difference who supported and who didn't? Are some of them more qualified? Because a no by a senior person you admire or respect or who has experience or power is v different in impact from 10 yes votes from friends...

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European referendum

No idea what that is. Link? Relevance?

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Workshop

Ok this just came out of nowhere for me. I can sort of figure it out from context but I should not have to. Please explain what this is and why it is here

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criterion

Criteria :)

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No highlighted text in this annotation.

Also... For someone talking biography and autoethnographic research, it feels veeeeery weird that this article tells me next to nothing about you :) why is that?

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Partiality, reflexivity, and citationality as

U may need to actually explain all this. Maybe it is under the table? I would put it before

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criteria, criterion

You're using criterion/criteria flipped. See earlier comment

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criterion

One criterion. Several criteria

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defining

I really feel like you may want to compare w other definitions. I also have no idea what your research was about and I have read much farther than this point. It would help to demystify this earlier. Even if the article is about Methodology not the actual research

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the researcher j

Style-wise, it reads a little awkwardly to refer to yourself as "the researcher". I would expect you to use "I" only

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demystify

Yes! And this work MATTERS

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space to reconcile some of my own divorced perceptions

Love this, how you explicate your blog as third space for you.

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everyone

Who's everyone?

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knowledge

Is biography merely involved as biographical knowledge, or is it more than that, with physical, emotional, spiritual, attitudinal dimensions

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pulse

Wow. Pulse is such a powerful, dynamic word. Great word choice

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formulating my own situated definition of autoethnography

Love love love this

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definition

Ok so you do mention defining Autoethnography and i like how you're describing the feeling and process (sort of) but I really want at this point to see some of what you found and how different they are from each other. I don't remember suffering too much while trying to find references on it, so I am surprised to be honest

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autoethnography

Would you like here or earlier to explain what Autoethnography means? Maybe as early as when you mention biography. It's really helpful to distinguish it from biography

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palpable objectification to the edit room floor

So far, i like the quotes you have brought in but don't understand this sentence. Also, is emphasis in the Denzin quote yours or in the original?

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phenomena

Phenomenon?

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